Tuesday, April 5, 2011

descriptive essay

Hello,

Now, it's time for you to write a description. It could be a friend or relative description. Remember the essay must be well structured, so you can read on the link before, some information about it, and also on the file of unit 4.

Come on, it's vey easy, so don't hesitate it, and just write.

Regards,

Ana Vázquez

6 comments:

  1. María José SamperApril 5, 2011 at 5:34 PM

    This is a picture of two animals: a dog and a cat. The dog is white and his ears are brown. The cat is brown and black. The two are on a red and white sofa. The dog is in the seat and the cat is on an orange blanket on the top of the sofa.They are very quiet and posing for the photo.
    It is a very curious photo because, although I don't like to generalize, it is said that dog and cats are not friends. In fact, there is a term used when two people do not get along, and says:"They take the dog and the cat".

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  2. Fº Agustin Matesanz
    This cute picture show us nature enemies side by side. In this case sure that this cat and this dog have grown up together and it seems to be in perfect armonie. In the background you can see the brown and grey cat on the top of a sofa and the dog, that is keen on what the owner is doing with the camera. The owner seems to take care about their pets. The brown ears dog could be smart and happy to be part of this different family. Everything is clean and organized. Children would love this picture

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  3. In this picture we can see two domestic animals, two pets, cat and dog. They seem quite and I feel relax to look at this image. The colour of blanket and sofa are very similar to ears's dog. It seems there is a good relation between animals and I would sure that they have grown up together. Cats are very independent, clever and smart animal, but on the whole I prefer dogs (depends on race) because are loving animals, always faithful. In my opinion, to finish, nowaday, to have or bring up animals in house leads a lot of time to educate them well.

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  4. Hi María José

    "the dog is at the seat..." very good.

    Regards,

    Ana Vázquez

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  5. Hi Agustin

    "natural enemies"... "in this case, it's sure..." don't forget the subject. "they seem to be... perfect harmony". "take care of..." "the brown ear dog..." if you use it this way it behaves like an adjective.

    Don't worry, it's very good.

    Regards,

    Ana Vázquez

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  6. Hi Noelia

    "they seem quiet..." the other "quite" is a synonym of "rather". "I feel relaxed..." "similar to the dog's ears" "good relationship" "I would assure..." Sure is an adjective. "smart animals". Don't forget the plural form. (it depends on race) because they are..." "nowadays" "...having or bringing up...means..."

    It's very good; don't worry, but go on writing and you'll improve a lot.

    Regards,

    Ana Vázquez

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